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Sequel to A Pirate Affair: yamibaki.deviantart.com/art/Pi…
Again, the ending was supposed to be different. THE ENDING WAS SUPPOSED BE NEUTRAL AND LUFFY WAS SUPPOSED TO BE SAD!Rinto. WTF  How did this happen?! AHHH WTF (Markiplier chat icon) 

Damn, I wrote this today in a few minutes. I wrote it earlier and had finished it but my mom had taken the computer from me, that's why I'm posting this now (at 12:10 AM). Let me know what you think, because I think it was alright. 

The first one was way better, the first is ALWAYS better. 

Still though, the FUCK happened to the ending? Uhm...?  Luffy was supposed to cry, but my fingers moved on their own. Gee fingers, thanks a lot. 
KANEKI KEN U NOT 

Anyways! I really love comments so leave one and let me know what you think. Also, don't forget my Hashtags! #MoarMaleReaderInserts #MoarMaleReader 
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...law will not be pleased at all😅 good job btw